Monday Prompt #2

A first sentence to get your juices flowing!

When I couldn’t stuff it back in the box, that’s when I knew I was really in trouble.

Looking forward to reading what you’ve come up with!

Update: It’s contest time! Email me or leave a comment with your best first paragraph using today’s prompt to enter to win a free query letter critique. Emails and comments must be received by midnight tonight, EST. Good luck!

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  • http://www.carolynsnowabiad.com Carolyn Abiad

    You’ll be getting mine soon enough :) Love the new look, btw!

    • http://tmarchini.wordpress.com Tracy Marchini

      Thanks, Carolyn! It’s much pinker, but I like it too! :)

  • http://ctefft.blogspot.com Cyndi Tefft

    When I couldn’t stuff it back in the box, that’s when I knew I was really in trouble. I gave it a final shove and a sharp pain in my finger coincided with the crunch of breaking glass. A broken picture frame stared up at me from the bottom of the box and I dug it out. A smear of blood partially obscured my mother’s face, but she looked resplendent in her white wedding gown. The groom smiled down at her with eyes that startlingly resembled my own. Only it wasn’t my father.

    • http://tmarchini.wordpress.com Tracy Marchini

      Hi Cyndi!

      You are our winner! Email me your query letter at myverbocity @ gmail . com for your prize!

      Congratulations! (Hey, winning is winning! :-P)
      Tracy

      • http://ctefft.blogspot.com Cyndi Tefft

        Yay- I won! :) Hehehe. Will send query over for your review. Thanks!w

        Cyndi